Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good membes of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion..
Children
have to learn how to become good members of Use synonyms
society
whether their Use synonyms
parents
or schools have the responsibility Use synonyms
of
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for
this
action. Some people believe that Linking Words
parents
should be the Use synonyms
one
, Correct pronoun usage
ones
however
, others believe that school is the only place to understand Linking Words
this
moral rule. I assume Linking Words
parents
should be Use synonyms
incharge
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in charge
for
teaching Change preposition
of
how
to become good members Correct pronoun usage
them how
in
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of
a
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apply
society
.
On the one hand, Use synonyms
parents
know their Use synonyms
children
best and they can be a Use synonyms
consistant
role Correct your spelling
consistent
constant
model
throughout their Fix the agreement mistake
models
childrens's
lives. Having more information about their kids might Correct your spelling
children's
be improve
communication between them, Change the verb form
improve
thus
, Linking Words
connection
between Add an article
the connection
a connection
parents
and child could be a good manner for teaching moral rules. Use synonyms
For instance
, toddlers easily understand prohibited Linking Words
actions
by Use synonyms
gaze
of their Add an article
the gaze
parents
, Use synonyms
therefore
, they will not try to do Linking Words
this
action, and their Linking Words
parents
will know their child can be Use synonyms
influantial
with similar Correct your spelling
influential
actions
.
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Furthermore
, Linking Words
parents
are living Use synonyms
heros
of their Correct your spelling
heroes
children
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which
will grow up Correct pronoun usage
who
with
acquiring their Change preposition
apply
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parents's
behaviours, and eventually, they will act like their Remove the s
parents'
parents
. If Use synonyms
father
in a Correct article usage
a father
nucleus
family, Replace the word
nuclear
for instance
, Linking Words
do
not assist in Correct subject-verb agreement
does
houseworks
, his son will not be a part of dishwashing or cleaning. Correct your spelling
housework
On the contrary
, their positive Linking Words
actions
,Use synonyms
for example
, Linking Words
like
helping senior citizens through Change preposition
apply
volentary
activities will be observed by his son and in the future he will Correct your spelling
voluntary
also
join community services.
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On the other hand
, schools are excellent facilities for learning good behaviour for Linking Words
children
. They can learn lots of important skills Use synonyms
such
as time management, Linking Words
self-descipline
or calculation. Correct your spelling
self-discipline
However
, since these facilities are parts of the national competition between provinces, they actually teach how to become a successful person rather than a good citizen. Linking Words
Although
some lectures are organised for teaching Linking Words
ethique
and Correct your spelling
ethics
moral
in Fix the agreement mistake
morals
society
, Use synonyms
remaining
lectures foster Correct article usage
the remaining
students
attention to become Change noun form
students'
student's
a
competitive Correct article usage
apply
student
.
From my point of view, Fix the agreement mistake
students
parents
should be aware of the responsibility for teaching good Use synonyms
actions
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for
their Change preposition
to
children
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,
and should be careful about their behaviours as role models. Not only their Remove the comma
apply
actions
can Use synonyms
be affect
the bond between their Change the verb form
affect
children
but Use synonyms
also
can affect their communication.
In conclusion, some people believe that Linking Words
parents
should take Use synonyms
the
responsibility for how to be a good Correct article usage
apply
citizen
in Fix the agreement mistake
citizens
the
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apply
society
, the remaining people believe that school is the best place to learn Use synonyms
this
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phenomen
. My opinion is Correct your spelling
phenomenon
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the action
an action
action
of Fix the agreement mistake
actions
parents
could Use synonyms
be affect
their Change the verb form
affect
children
, Use synonyms
therefore
, they should teach their Linking Words
children
to become a part of Use synonyms
society
positively.Use synonyms
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