In many parts of the world today there is a profitable market for products which lighten or whiten people’s skin. Outline the reasons for using such products and discuss what effects they have in terms of health and society.

There are many products and aesthetic services to make

people

's

skin

brighten or whiten these days.

However

,

this

trend

is not just nowadays' fashion. It comes from back in the past. And I think it is not bad for our

health

but it is bad for our society. In the following, I will explain

this

view in more depth. In the past, bright or white-coloured

skin

was the symbol of noble status, who did not work outside. In

this

point, what I want to make clear is,

this

is not regarded to the white

people

. It is just from each country's tradition. In Korea, where I live now,

for example

, we

also

have many products for

skin

lightening. The

trend

of craving bright

skin

due to

the highest hierarchy comes from the very past, approximately more than 1,000 years ago when Korean didn't know white

people

.  These criteria of

skin

tone remain nowadays.

For instance

, we can still see

this

situation when

people

have a bias

to

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dark

skin

person

comes

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coming

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from the countryside and white coloured

skin

person comes from the urban city.

Hence

, I suggest that the

trend

of our

skin

tones is from our traditional criteria.

This

is not just recent fashion. I do not think

this

trend

is harmful to

people

's

health

. Rather, I think

this

effort makes

people

's

skin

healthier because what they try is like

this

, making the

skin

barrier stronger, keeping the

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water sufficient, and supplying many vitamins.

Therefore

, we can say

this

kind of concern is good for

people

's

skin

health

.

Nevertheless

,

however

, we are not able to see

this

trend

is

also

healthy for our society. The typical type of beauty criteria is not good for our community,

this

makes

people

see others with prejudice.

This

is a diverse era so various tones of

skin

, which is from their originality, have to be respected

also

. We have to make the world love our own

skin

tone. To summarize, the

trend

of brightening or whitening

people

's

skin

originates from the past, because of the difference in hierarchy's

skin

. The effort to make

skin

brightening or whitening is not bad for our

skin

health

.

However

,

this

fashion makes

people

have unhealthy biases,

therefore

, in conclusion, I believe that

this

trend

is not good for our society so we need to change

this

issue.