The bar chart gives the top eight online activities in Slovakia in a given month. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where necessary. Write at least 150 words

The bar chart gives the top eight online activities in Slovakia in a given month.

 

 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where necessary. Write at least 150 words
This
chart provides information about the most popular eight online activities in Slovakia in a given month by adult
males
and
females
. Units are given in %.
Overall
, using email is the most popular
activity
for
both
females
and
males
,
on the contrary
, job hunting has the lowest percentage for
both
of them. As can be seen from the table, the most popular
activity
is using email more than 80% for
both
females
and
males
.
On the other hand
, Job hunting has the lowest and the same 20% for
both
sexes. In terms of health research, it has the highest gap between men who figured out nearly 35% and women who have doubled the number of men, which is 60%. Interestingly,
females
have one more popular
activity
. The text or instant messaging percentage is
also
the same as using an email, at 80%,
while
for
males
, it is the secondary
activity
but has as same
as
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female percentage, which is 80%. The other options’ percentages have not been that much offset between
both
sexes.
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