The bar chart gives the top eight online activities in Slovakia in a given month. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where necessary. Write at least 150 words

The bar chart gives the top eight online activities in Slovakia in a given month.

 

 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where necessary. Write at least 150 words
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This
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chart provides information about the most popular eight online activities in Slovakia in a given month by adult
males
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and
females
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. Units are given in %.
Overall
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, using email is the most popular
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for
both
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females
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and
males
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,
on the contrary
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, job hunting has the lowest percentage for
both
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of them. As can be seen from the table, the most popular
activity
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is using email more than 80% for
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females
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and
males
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.
On the other hand
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, Job hunting has the lowest and the same 20% for
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sexes. In terms of health research, it has the highest gap between men who figured out nearly 35% and women who have doubled the number of men, which is 60%. Interestingly,
females
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have one more popular
activity
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. The text or instant messaging percentage is
also
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the same as using an email, at 80%,
while
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for
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, it is the secondary
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but has as same
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female percentage, which is 80%. The other options’ percentages have not been that much offset between
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sexes.
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Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 88%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words males, females, activity, both with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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