The diagram below shows a simple system that turns dirty water into clean water. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
the given diagram illustrates how to make a basic
water
filter to produce clean Use synonyms
water
.
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Overall
. there are 5 main Linking Words
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, starting with impure Use synonyms
water
and finishing with drinking Use synonyms
water
from the tap
the first Use synonyms
steps
. they use two plastic barrels to connect with each other through a tube and the top of the first bin is Use synonyms
water
and its bottom half are three mixtures of sand, charcoal and gravel. the second Use synonyms
Use synonyms
steps
. the next one is a filtered Fix the agreement mistake
step
water
tank.
At the beginning of the process, the third Use synonyms
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steps
, Fix the agreement mistake
step
water
is poured into the first tank. After that, it goes down through the sand layer, charcoal layer, and gravel layer. the four Use synonyms
steps
. the impure Use synonyms
water
will be removed and the clean Use synonyms
water
gets into the second Use synonyms
water
tank. the final Use synonyms
steps
. the user can use Use synonyms
from
the tap and the Correct pronoun usage
it from
water
ready to distribute to the market and userUse synonyms
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