The diagram below shows a simple system that turns dirty water into clean water. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows a simple system that turns dirty water into clean water.

Summarise the information by selecting

and reporting the main features, and make

comparisons where relevant.
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the given diagram illustrates how to make a basic
water
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filter to produce clean
water
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.
Overall
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. there are 5 main
steps
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, starting with impure
water
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and finishing with drinking
water
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from the tap the first
steps
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. they use two plastic barrels to connect with each other through a tube and the top of the first bin is
water
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and its bottom half are three mixtures of sand, charcoal and gravel. the second
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steps
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step
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. the next one is a filtered
water
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tank. At the beginning of the process, the third
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steps
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,
water
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is poured into the first tank. After that, it goes down through the sand layer, charcoal layer, and gravel layer. the four
steps
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. the impure
water
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will be removed and the clean
water
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gets into the second
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tank. the final
steps
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. the user can use
from
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it from
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the tap and the
water
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ready to distribute to the market and user
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Linking words: Add more linking words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water, steps with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Diagram
  • Simple system
  • Dirty water
  • Clean water
  • Overall process
  • Input
  • Output
  • Comparison
  • Relevant
  • Environmental impact
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