■The chart below give information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010. ■Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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The chart illustrates the percentage of British
people
expenditure Change noun form
people's
to
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on
charity
by age range for the years between 1990 and 2010.
Overall
, the total amount of money that
spent on Correct pronoun usage
apply
charity
in 1990 is much higher than that in 2010. The age that spent highest
expenditure is Change the article
the highest
from
36-50 years old.
A deep analysis of the bar chart provided reveals the first three groups Change preposition
apply
were
spending Unnecessary verb
apply
to
Change preposition
on
the
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apply
charity
on
1990 are higher than Change preposition
in
2010
. Especially the 18-25 Change preposition
in 2010
ages
are three times more with around 6% and approximately 17% perspective. Followed by the 36-50 ages
groups, spending most
money with about 41% in 1990 and 35% in 2010
From an Add an article
the most
overall
perspective, it is evident that the amount of money that spent
on Add a missing verb
is spent
charity
of 51-65 and 65+ age people are figure remaining constant. The data give the information that the 51-65 ages
spending percentage is 35% in 1990 and approximately 40% in 2010. The 65+ Fix the agreement mistake
age
ages
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age
also
has a
same data with around 31% in 1990 and 35% in 2010.Correct article usage
the
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