the chart mention about the average percentage of five North American lakes covered in ice during two 20-year period between 1973-92 and 1913-2012

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the average
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between 1973-92 and 1913-2012 .
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the lowest in Ontario, there are less than
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and more than
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. There are approximately
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five
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in 1973-1992 in Superior Lake but the chart
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that in 1993-2012, the average
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half to about fifteen
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equal to Michigan in
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and
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
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