The graph and chart below give information on the average daily maximum and minimum temperatures in degrees Celsius and the average number of days with rainfall each month for two Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The graph and chart below give information on the average daily maximum and minimum temperatures in degrees Celsius and the average number of days with rainfall each month for two Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The two figures illustrate daily temperatures in Celcius and the number of rainfall days in each month all over a year in Brisbane and Canberra.
Overall
, in the line chart, despite the max
temperature
in Brisbane, the other three lines have the same trend. In the column graph, the
first
city has more rainy days than the latter. On the one hand, in Brisbane, the minimum
temperature
of it starts at 26*C in the
first
month and
then
drops to the coolest at 11*C in July, after that, it plunges back to the original
temperature
at the end
of the year,
while
its maximum
temperature
fluctuates in the
first
six
months
, which starts 28 and reach the top at 30*C in February and end at 21 in June, and
then
gradually increase to 29 degrees Celcius in December.
On the other hand
, in Canberra, the top and bottom heat of
months
, which start at 21 and 13, and end at 20 and 11 respectively, have the same trend, which is a drop from the top in January and
then
steadily increase to another top in December. On
further
analysis, the column chart shows that Brisband has more rainy days than Canberra, which is 7
months
, the
first
five
months
and the
last
two
months
, compared to 5
months
which are in the middle of the year.
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