Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Parents who send their children to private schools do not have to pay the taxes that support the national
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the country can be let to some serious
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public
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system benefits society.
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.If families using private schools were exempted from taxes.It could lead to a conflict in school funding,affecting the quality of
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less privileged
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implementing modifications in tax laws for a
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imbalance in the learning system.If a certain group
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given special privileges in tax laws it is likely that people will prefer private
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over public
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which may cause a disparity in the quality of
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significant issues for the country.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • tax exemption
  • public education
  • private schools
  • collective responsibility
  • societal welfare
  • equitable access
  • financial burden
  • social cohesion
  • tax credits
  • vouchers
  • subsidies
  • state-funded
  • socioeconomic disparities
  • public vs. private sector
  • quality of education
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