Mrs barrett,an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs barrett. In your letter •suggest how you could help her in her home •say why you would like to do this work • explain when you will and will not be available.

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Dear Mrs Barret, I am writing

this

letter to apply for your advertisement for a household job. You may be interested to know I live next to your house and I have read your advertisement for housework next summer. In your position, I would like to have a job to help you in your home for a few hours. I think I should tell you that I have some experience in the house works

such

as cleaning up the house and cooking

besides

taking care of the baby and playing with them as I am studying Early childhood education. I love cooking had cooking certificates for some Asian and European styles and I hope I will serve you if you give me an opportunity to work. My plans over next summer will save money to travel and it would be great if I take

this

job. I am available from 15pm-21pm every Monday- Wednesday, Friday and weekend. I hope to hear from you soon Yours faithfully MyBui

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7 paragraphs

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8.50

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