Some people believe that reading stories from a book is better than watching TV or playing computer games for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is a point of debate that reading stories is a good hoppy than watching movies or playing games for the youth. Though I completely agree with

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notion. The upcoming paragraphs will shed light on my arguments related to some active reasons for

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conceptions,

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will lead to

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conclusion. The first and foremost reason for

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influence of reading

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on life is that it can improve creativity. In simple words, the more books people read, the more imagination they have. A range of studies

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that children who enjoy reading are more creative,

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and the world throughout their perspective will be more

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, dreamlike and liveable.

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, reading

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improves the

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and grammar

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a child in a particular language. Books written by well-known writers

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as Life of Pi by Yann Martel or

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Boy by Hector Malot not only provide youngsters with a stock of wonderful knowledge but

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equip them with

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of poetic words.

Furthermore

, reading can boost children’s ability to concentrate. By

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reading carefully,

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, children can learn how to present their ideas meticulously.

On the other hand

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head in advanced technology

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not only causes physical problems but

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leads to psychological issues

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as depression or anxiety disorder.

Besides

, the more time teenagers spend time on modern technology, the more socially isolated they feel.

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, relationships among them will get worse and they themselves will gradually become passive and brainless.

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reasons, it is obvious that the advantages of reading books are outweighed those of using machinery. In conclusion, the benefits of playing computer games or watching movies are probably overshadowed by those of reading stories.

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, both children and adults should practise reading

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which is necessary because it can improve social skills and create

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great routine.