the diagram belows shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years
The illustration gives information about the public
library
floor plan over two decades.
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Further
, it has internal fiction too in the inside of Linking Words
history
section. Use synonyms
Additionally
, it has a special part for newspapers and periodicals; and contains eight tables.
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On the other hand
, the public Linking Words
library
became more modern in the second Use synonyms
decade
. The number of Use synonyms
sections
increased to six places (Use synonyms
history
, fiction, self-help, kitchen, economics, and law). It contains a special place for children's books and there is a big area for children's. Newspapers and periodicals are replaced by films and DVDs, Use synonyms
while
the number of tables decreased to four bigger ones compared to the first Linking Words
decade
. Use synonyms
In addition
, there is a special area for computers which was absent in the past plan.
In conclusion, the new plan is more comfortable compare Linking Words
the
old one, which contains a lot of new requirements.Change preposition
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