the diagram belows shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years
The illustration gives information about the public
library
floor plan over two decades.
Overall
, the ground floor of the government library
has history
and self-help sections
only in the first decade
, while
in the second decade
, it renewed and added other parts such
as kitchen, economics, and law sections
.
In the first decade
, the library
has two big sections
named self-help and history
sections
. Further
, it has internal fiction too in the inside of history
section. Additionally
, it has a special part for newspapers and periodicals; and contains eight tables.
On the other hand
, the public library
became more modern in the second decade
. The number of sections
increased to six places (history
, fiction, self-help, kitchen, economics, and law). It contains a special place for children's books and there is a big area for children's. Newspapers and periodicals are replaced by films and DVDs, while
the number of tables decreased to four bigger ones compared to the first decade
. In addition
, there is a special area for computers which was absent in the past plan.
In conclusion, the new plan is more comfortable compare the
old one, which contains a lot of new requirements.Change preposition
to the
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