the diagram belows shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years

the diagram belows shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years
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The illustration gives information about the public
library
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floor plan over two decades.
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, the ground floor of the government
library
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has
history
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and self-help
sections
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only in the first
decade
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,
while
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in the second
decade
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, it renewed and added other parts
such
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as kitchen, economics, and law
sections
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. In the first
decade
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, the
library
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has two big
sections
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named self-help and
history
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sections
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.
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, it has internal fiction too in the inside of
history
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section.
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, it has a special part for newspapers and periodicals; and contains eight tables.
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, the public
library
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became more modern in the second
decade
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. The number of
sections
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increased to six places (
history
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, fiction, self-help, kitchen, economics, and law). It contains a special place for children's books and there is a big area for children's. Newspapers and periodicals are replaced by films and DVDs,
while
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the number of tables decreased to four bigger ones compared to the first
decade
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.
In addition
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, there is a special area for computers which was absent in the past plan. In conclusion, the new plan is more comfortable compare
the
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to the
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old one, which contains a lot of new requirements.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words library, history, sections, decade with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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