14.Although families have powerful influence on children, the influence that comes from outside the family plays a bigger part in children’s development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Children's development is mainly impacted by their families, but there is no denial effect from others. I absolutely agree with
this
opinion, thanks to modern technological improvement the younger generation easily influences others.
First of all, in the incipient period, scions mostly influence their mature but, but these effects gradually replace the other, for example
, peers, natural and cyber environment. In this
case, this
effect is not always beneficial so, violence, crime, smoking, and vulgarism are behaviour that the younger generation should be away from it. Moreover
, children's character mainly shapes others' opinions and behaviour. In my opinion, mature should realize this
situation and save the younger generation from these negative effects. If their parent does not spend enough time with their child it should be a harmful consequence later on much more harmful effect.
Secondly
, the family impact is never underestimated because it always affects a child's psychology. Thus
, from starting point of each life parents' behaviour significantly impact the children's character so, the younger ones learn anything from them directly and it becomes their truth. Nevertheless
, it gradually changes, so technological improvements accelerate this
process such
as social networks thanks to gathering people. On the other hand
, schoolmates , teachers, and peers also
significantly affect their life because they spend their most of time with them. In this
,case their effects are more than their parents.
To conclude
, from starting point of life maturity are a major impact on the scion but, it gradually replaces their other influences, such
as online groups, school-mares, and peers.Submitted by 2083749065 on
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