The bar chart gives the top eight online activities in Slovakia in a given month. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where necessary. Write at least 150 words

The bar chart gives the top eight online activities in Slovakia in a given month.

 

 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where necessary. Write at least 150 words
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The bar chart illustrates the most popular online activities in Slovakia through July by adult internet users.
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, it is clear from the chart that the percentage of females was a higher trend in seven online activities than in males,
while
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job hunting
activity
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was the lowest trend and the same rate by men and women at about 21%. Looking at the bar chart for more detail. the
activity
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of health research among females rapidly rose by around 26% more than among males .What is more, the rate of online education and text messaging activities was a little bit different for adults by about 1%.
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, the
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of using email females was a top percentage of about 88%, when it slightly went down to 83% of males the same as in text messaging. Added to that, women's rate in social networking
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slowly increased by about 1% as in internet banking.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words activity with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
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