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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopement next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The plans present the discrepant of the current version of an airport with its transformation in the following year.
Overall
, the given airport is going to undergo significant modifications,
such
 as the expansion of the area for gates, and the arrival of various novel services.
Firstly
, as the space for gates dramatically rockets, the total amount of entries will notably increase too, from 8 to 18 doorways.
In addition
, in order to facilitate the customers, a sky train is going to replace the conventional walkway.
Secondly
, notwithstanding the security passport control
as well as
 passport control customs centre witness no alteration at all, several features will be added. The most notable
one
 is the number of doors for departures and arrivals will be double, from each
one
 has
one
 single gateway to two entries. The coffee shop's space will be occupied by the check-in place, and the area for bag dropping will be positioned exactly where the check-in place is currently staying. There will be
one
 more coffee shop,
one
 is next to the departure gateway, and another is beside the place of passport control customs. To the right of
one
 arrival door will be the atm,
as well as
 the car hire area.
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