You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Write a lette to this friend. In your letter Say why he/she would not enjoy college explain why getting a good job is a good idea for him/her suggest types job that would be suitable for him/her

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Dear Tim, It's really great to hear from you again! I understand how difficult making the decision

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your education can be, but I'm glad you reached out. Sincerely, I highly doubt you will have a pleasant time in college seeing as you already had a well-paying job in the past. It will be a bore having to learn basic concepts which you already know. I strongly believe you are better off getting a job and here's why.

Firstly

, you'll be making enough money to help your family out at home and

also

cater to your personal needs.

In addition

, you get to build a network of professionals who can help you grow professionally. If you still love planning and organising, you can try looking for jobs in the project management space. You can work as a program assistant or even as a project lead. These roles will suit your personality and expertise. I look forward to hearing what you

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decide to do. Best of luck! Warm regards, Loveth.

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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7 paragraphs

171 words

8.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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