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In today's time the internet is making it easy to stdy online from home. some perfer online courses to study they think it is better. Others prefer classroom education discuss both views and share your perion.

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 of getting
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an education
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the online
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 is growing at an alarming pace majority of
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institutions
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which
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provide lucrative online facilities. across the world.
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endorse online coaching better
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folks
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provide
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 many fold benefits to the
people
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flexbility
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flexibility
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online
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people
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 of online Courses they are any time accessible
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boon
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that younger
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 should only get
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education
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 physically from any institution. Colleges and
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alway
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always
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best
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experify
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experiences
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obtain
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practice
practising
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for those
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 who study in specific domains
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 in sciences, engineering
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without
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serious
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getting
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an education
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by
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coherence cohesion
The essay has a weak logical structure, with unclear progression of ideas and lack of coherence.
coherence cohesion
The introduction and conclusion are present, but need improvement in terms of clarity and relevance.
coherence cohesion
The main points are briefly supported, but lack depth and clarity.
task achievement
The response is incomplete and lacks clear comprehensive ideas. The essay fails to address the task requirements adequately.
task achievement
The essay lacks specific and relevant examples to support the points made. The ideas presented are not well-developed.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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