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Some people think that the main purpose of schools is to teach children to be a good citizen or worker rather than to benefit them as individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Everybody knows that
school
 time is very important in
people
's
life
. Everybody learns
life
 begins in
school
such
 as relationships, friendly, coulter, economic system e.g. that's why I disagree schools goal is only to be a good citizen or worker. İ
t
 has some reasons.
First,
schools give us politicians
people
, economists, doctors or engineers. İf we don'
t
 go to
school
 that couldn'
t
 be
this
 job.
For example
, Ali is from Ankara he went to
school
 and won a medical university and he is a good doctor now. İf he thought of
school
 only for being a worker or a good citizen, can he be a doctor?
Second,
schools aren'
t
 only for jobs, İ
t
 mainly pass time with friends, learning
life
 through games ( because we begin
life
 by games in
school
) learn some of our coulters at
school
.
For instance
, many
people
 go to
school
then
 finish
school
 and they don'
t
 do special work
then
 contusion
life
. many
people
 merit with a friend of the
school
. İf they didn'
t
 go to
school
while
 they didn'
t
 meet their wife or husband.
To sum up
, every
people
 must go to
school
 until the 12th. class, it is rool in many countries. İn my opinion,
school
 is very important, every country have to make power their education system, it is very important for a developed country.
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