You saw an advert in the newspaper asking for volunteers to help run a charity event. Write a letter of application to the organisers. In your letter:  Explain why you are interest in helping  Give details suitable past experience  Suggest ways you might help with the event

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

this

letter to you because I am willing to assist you in the charity event

that is

going to be held in the near future. I came to know

this

via the advertisement that was published in the local newspaper. I am always seeking to help needy people and

this

occasion is going to happen in my town. So I do not want to miss

this

opportunity. I am quite young so I can handle heavy duty.

Moreover

, I do have some experience of similar work. I am one of the members of the rescue team that recently helped people who were stuck in their houses

due to

the flood. My main role was to deliver food to victims.

Similarly

, I can help in your charity event by serving water or other

beverage

Fix the agreement mistake

beverages

show examples

to the visitors. Apart from that, I can

also

arrange the

sitting

Correct your spelling

seating

show examples

area for the guests. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours Sincerely, Harpreet Kaur.

Submitted by harpreet291kaur on Thu Aug 03 2023

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task response

Provide more specific examples of past experience related to organizing events or working with charities to strengthen your application.

coherence cohesion

Ensure that each paragraph is well connected to the preceding and following paragraphs to improve coherence and cohesion.

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6Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

165 words

6.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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