The mao below shows the Frenton town in 1990 and 2012

The given two Maps compare the town of Trenton in the Years 1990 and 2012.

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, it's clear that there has been a big change in the playing fields with trees and new entertainment facilities built over the period. It can be seen that the place of

bank

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the bank

a bank

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has changed to

restaurant

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a restaurant

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whereas

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school

Correct article usage

the school

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and Hospital didn't change. Houses changed to Blocks of flats from 1990 to 2012 and shops

also

Linking Words

became a big

supermarket

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supermarkets

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has been a great changes

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

80 words

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The mao below shows the Frenton town in 1990 and 2012

Fully explain your ideas

Many people today are choosing to live and work in another country after graduating from university in their home country. Why is this? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In some countries, many young people choose to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.

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