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The bar chart below shows the top 10 countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the top 10 countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph illustrates the
energy
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production
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 and consumption of the top 10 nations in 2014. It is evident that China and the United States were the largest
energy
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 consumers and producers,
while
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 Russia, Japan, and India
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 had significant
power
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 requirements. In 2014, China held the top position both in
energy
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production
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 and consumption, generating approximately 5500
billion
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kWh
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 and consuming a similar amount. The United States, ranking
second,
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produced and consumed nearly 20% less
energy
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 than China. Russia stood as the third-largest
power
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 producer with a
production
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 of 1,057
billion
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kWh
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. Japan, India, Canada, France, Brazil, and Germany generated
power
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 ranging between 500 and 1,000
billion
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kWh
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.
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, the Republic of Korea had the lowest electricity generation, reaching only 485
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kWh
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. Notably, Germany was the only nation where
energy
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 consumption exceeded
production
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. Despite being ranked seventh in terms of
power
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production
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, France and Brazil both generated and consumed the same amount, around 550
billion
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kWh
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 and 450
billion
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kWh
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, respectively.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, production, power, billion, kwh with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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