professional workers like doctors, nurses and teachers make a greater contribution to society and so should be paid more than sports and entertainment personalities. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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whether or not specialized employees get

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more than

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industry is certainly a contentious one. Whilst there are valid arguments to the contrary. I believe that doctors, nurses and teachers are should

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bigger cash, especially at an all of the age because it can improve them confident and hard work. And the same time, it adds to the development of the country. On the one hand, many people discern that the degree of contribution should not be related to the amount of salary.

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means that different industries can get

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money. An eminent

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example of the actors’ salary is higher than the general professional.

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is because of development of the society, and the film and television industry. And

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time on health themselves.

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, many folks will pay for it.

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will can lead to an increase in the value of idols and physical culture.

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, despite the previously-mentioned non-professional

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are more to receive

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. I emphasize that the medical treatment and education fields should gain more funds and benefits than other areas.

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to a type of

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construction.

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, doctors often stay up late to save many lives.

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means that they contribute more time than the average person.

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, their income should be the highest and it is

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work

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hard. In conclusion,

after

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essay manifested the above-mentioned points, it can be reiterated that the government should raise salaries for education and health trades.

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not only promotes the good progress of the state, and

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specialized workers.