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The chart below gives information on the average cost of a monthly plan from four different mobile phone providers in a European country, between January and September 2012, measured in euros.

The chart below gives information on the average cost of a monthly plan from four different mobile phone providers in a European country, between January and September 2012, measured in euros.
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the provided line graph demonstrates the rate of the monthly cost for four types of cellular phones for
nine-month
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the nine-month
a nine-month
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 plan
during
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in
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 2012 within Europe.
Overall
, it is evident that the chart showed a constant fluctuation
along with
 regular growth
at the end
 of the period.
To begin
 with, Despite Demo depicting the highest average
at
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in
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 January accounted for 15
euros
, and over the period showed climbing to register the highest point in July
25
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at 25
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euros
 , but abruptly declined again to record just under 25
euros
 in September.
in
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In
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the
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contrast,
while
 Alpha started with the lowest rate at January exactly at 5
euros
, the price rate remained slightly stable until June. Suddenly, the product rocketed to hit the peak,
finally
registered
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registering
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 the highest cost of
25euros
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25 euros
 in September.
Furthermore
, Sim TX in comparison with Lex had embarked with a marginal fluctuation accompanied by moderate
growing
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growth
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.
However
, Sim TX has been overtaken by Lex at Jane, but both
nearly
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are nearly
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 just under 15
euros
, bringing them to
end
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an end
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 with opposite trends.
whereas
 SimTX finished with touching the lowest cost boasting merely under 10
euros
, Lex contributes almost over 15
euros
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words euros with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 2 times.
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