The line graph illustrates the average emissions of carbon dioxide by each person in several countries in Europe from 1967 to 2007

The line graph illustrates the average emissions of carbon dioxide by each  person in several countries in Europe from 1967 to 2007
This
Line chart shows the average emissions of
carbon
dioxide
per person in four countries in the UK. They
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the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal respectively. it was between 1967 to 2007. for the period from 1967 to 2007 the chart shows that the United Kingdom was the highest
intake
of
carbon
dioxide
and the lowest
intake
of CO2 was Italy and Portugal but it increased a lot in the
last
40 years. In Italy and Portugal in 1967, the
intake
of C02 was 1 metric tonne and 4 metric
tonnes
respectively, over the years both countries increased the
intake
of C02. It stops
at the end
period of the year 2007. The average from all the counties in the
last
decade that
carbon
dioxide
emit was 5.5. More than 8 metric
tonnes
of
carbon
dioxide
were emitted in 1967, it rose to 10.5 metric
tonnes
in 1977 and decreased sharply between the years of 1977-1987 from 10.5 to 7 metric
tonnes
and it decrease more until in 2007 the C02 level emitted was 5.
Furthermore
, the United Kingdom had a downfall of
carbon
dioxide
in the given period.
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