Your friend recently moved to new city. You will also be moving to the same city. Write a letter to your friends and include: – Ask where to find a place to live – Tell them what type of place you’re looking for – Share some fun things you would like to do when you get there

Hello Dave, I hope
this
letter finds you well. I am writing
this
letter to acquire about the rental rooms available in
Victoria
. From our previous conversation, I came to know that you moved to
Victoria
for a job, recently. I am delighted to inform you that I
also
got a bookkeeping job in
Victoria
, which is probably why, I would
also
be shifting after one month. Currently, I am looking for a single room online, but unfortunately, I am not able to find the perfect one. I will be really grateful if you can give provide some suggestions for finding a room. I would prefer to have a room in an apartment which is neat and tidy.
Moreover
, cleaning should be done regularly by the staff. It must be within walking distance from all the amenities
such
as grocery stores, a bank, a bus stop, a gym, and a park. When I will be reaching
Victoria
, I would like to go to the whale watching site downtown in the city with you. I would
also
prefer to have a bus tour of the city with you.
Additionally
, we can have dinner at one of the restaurants. I am excited to see you. Take care, Jashan
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

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