You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart shows British Emigration to selected destinations between 2004 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The chart shows British Emigration to selected destinations between 2004 and 2007.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
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This
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bar graph illustrates how many people immigrated from Britain to five other countries from 2004 to 2007.
Overall
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, throughout the whole time frame, Australia was the most popular destination, and the
number
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of
migrants
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to Spain was the second highest.
To begin
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, the
number
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of people who immigrated to Australia exceeded all  other countries over the four-year period. It is remarkable that the figure for
migrants
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in 2006 was over 50
thousand
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, which was higher than any other record.
On the other hand
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, the levels of immigration to the USA were between 19 and 25
thousand
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, with records of them in 2004 and 2006 being the same at around 25
thousand
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. Turning to Spain and New Zealand, both of them experienced a downward trend between 2004 and 2006.
Although
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the
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of
migrants
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in Spain in the first three years was over 30
thousand
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, it dropped to around 27
thousand
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in 2007.
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, though the
number
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of
migrants
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in New Zealand was 23
thousand
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in 2004, it was just 20
thousand
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in the final year.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, migrants, thousand with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • emigration
  • migrate
  • destination
  • trend
  • notable
  • significant
  • spike
  • drop
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • decline
  • stable
  • consistent
  • overview
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