You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart shows British Emigration to selected destinations between 2004 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
This
bar graph illustrates how many people immigrated from Britain to five other countries from 2004 to 2007. Overall
, throughout the whole time frame, Australia was the most popular destination, and the number
of migrants
to Spain was the second highest.
To begin
, the number
of people who immigrated to Australia exceeded all other countries over the four-year period. It is remarkable that the figure for migrants
in 2006 was over 50 thousand
, which was higher than any other record. On the other hand
, the levels of immigration to the USA were between 19 and 25 thousand
, with records of them in 2004 and 2006 being the same at around 25 thousand
.
Turning to Spain and New Zealand, both of them experienced a downward trend between 2004 and 2006. Although
the number
of migrants
in Spain in the first three years was over 30 thousand
, it dropped to around 27 thousand
in 2007. Similarly
, though the number
of migrants
in New Zealand was 23 thousand
in 2004, it was just 20 thousand
in the final year.Submitted by songcheng619 on
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