The table shows the amount spent on healthcare in different countries. Summarise the information by selecting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The table shows the amount spent on healthcare in different countries. Summarise the information by selecting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

13.Practise doing

Task1

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Task 1

of the IELTS Writing test. The table1 shows the

differencies

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differences

difference

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spending on

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helthcare

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health care

per person among 8 countries in 2010. The highest spending

country

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is Japan and the lowest spending company is

Brazil

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Overall

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people

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who live in

east

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East

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and

south

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South

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east asian

country

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apply

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spend for healthcare

whish

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which

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is more than 1,000

dollers

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dollars

such

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as Japan, South Kora and Singapore.

In contrast

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people

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who live in central

asian

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Asian

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and south american countries spent on

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helthcare

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health care

lower than 1,000

dollers

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dollars

such

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as Bahrain, Kuwait, Argentina, Chile,

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Brazil

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and Brazil

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. Especially, in Chile and

Brazil

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people

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spent under 500

dollers

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dollars

for

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helthcare

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healthcare

for

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an eath

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eath

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each

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person. The

expediture

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expenditure

seems

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go up depending on economic development and population.

People

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who live in Japan, South Korea and Singapore would have money compared with

other

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another country

other countries

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country

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table1

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Table 1

and

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the

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number of

family

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a family

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member

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members

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isn’t

laege

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large

Economic

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The economic

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grouth

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growth

Brazil

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is remarkable,

however

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, the

country

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also

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have

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has

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large

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a large

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population, that’s why

earch

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each

family wouldn’t

spent

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spend

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helthcare

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healthcare

a lot for family

mebers

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members

. [161words for 20mins]

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Aug 4, 2023

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.

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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Contractions: Don't use contractions.

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Basic structure: Change the first paragraph.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words helthcare, country, brazil, people with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the first paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.

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5
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
4
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
34
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

172 words

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The table shows the amount spent on healthcare in different countries. Summarise the information by selecting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Some people think that international tourism is beneficial, while others believe it creates problems. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people say in order to prevent illness and diseases, governments should focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets, and there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

In some countries, private cars are now banned from certain city centres. What are the advantages of such a system and do you feel that this is something that most cities should adopt?