The local council has decided to build a block of flats on the park opposite the place where you are living Write a letter to the editor of the local newspaper protesting this development of a beautiful and necessary green space in your town Make suggestions for what people can of should do to stop the development.

Dear Sir or Madam I am writing
this
letter to bring to your attention that the local
council
of Kent has decided to build flats in the
park
. The proposed development will destroy the green belt in our vicinity and promotes pollution. The green
park
is an oxygen zone and caters to a large population of our town .All kinds of people like youngsters and senior citizens enjoy the
park
. the
park
serves as a recreational space for the entire town. Constructing flats in the
park
will kill the green space.
However
, we can stop
this
development to protect the
park
. we can organise a protest in front of the city
council
office. for ,that we have to assemble people for protest. ,
Furthermore
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we can plan a hunger strike in front of the city
council
. That will make the city
council
reconsider their decision to make flats in
park
space. looking forward to your response. Yours Faithfully Martin Crow
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