The following bar chart shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European City in 1960, 1980, and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart
illustrated
the changing patterns of Wrong verb form
illustrates
transport
used in a European city from 1960 to 2000. Use synonyms
Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
the Linking Words
use
of the car as a main of Use synonyms
transport
dramatically increased over the period, Use synonyms
while
the others fell. It can be seen that in 1960 the car was used least as a method of Linking Words
transport
with only about 7% of the Use synonyms
population
using Use synonyms
this
method but car Linking Words
use
grew strongly to Use synonyms
finally
reach well over 35% of the Linking Words
population
by 2000. Use synonyms
Linking Words
Whereas
Change preposition
In
this
same period the popularity of walking, which had been the most popular means of Linking Words
transport
with 35% of the Use synonyms
population
in 1960 having it as their preferred way fell to 10%. It is noticeable that bicycle Use synonyms
use
Use synonyms
also
fell from a high of about 27% in 1960 to just 7% in 2000. It is noticeable that bus Linking Words
use
was more popular with almost 20% of the Use synonyms
population
in 1960 and rising to a peak of about 27% in 1980 before falling back to about 18% in 2000.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words transport, use, population with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
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