The following bar chart shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European City in 1960, 1980, and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The following bar chart shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European City in 1960, 1980, and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart
illustrated
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illustrates
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the changing patterns of
transport
used in a European city from 1960 to 2000.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the
use
of the car as a main of
transport
dramatically increased over the period,
while
the others fell. It can be seen that in 1960 the car was used least as a method of
transport
with only about 7% of the
population
using
this
method but car
use
grew strongly to
finally
reach well over 35% of the
population
by 2000.
Whereas
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In
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this
same period the popularity of walking, which had been the most popular means of
transport
with 35% of the
population
in 1960 having it as their preferred way fell to 10%. It is noticeable that bicycle
use
also
fell from a high of about 27% in 1960 to just 7% in 2000. It is noticeable that bus
use
was more popular with almost 20% of the
population
in 1960 and rising to a peak of about 27% in 1980 before falling back to about 18% in 2000.
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