The pie charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevan

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pie chart shows the data of time that adults spend on

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of activities in one nation in

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different years, the 1958 and 2008

Overall

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, working was the activity that

have

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taken the most space in the

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pie charts.

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, each figure has different percentages for each activity. In the year 1958, the most common activities that people did was working and sleeping, those

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have approximately percentages, with 33% and 32%. Followed by going out with either friends or family have the proportions of 19%, relaxed at home have 8% and other exercises

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playing sports or hobbies things have 2% lower than the previous activity, the least common exercise

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to travelling to work, with only 2%. 50 years later, in 2008, there was a

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in the pie chart. It is noticeable that working still managed to get

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first place with 42%, a big growth. Next up was sleeping, took a quarter of the figure. The third place was given to relaxing at home, took 13%. Surprisingly, the fourth place belong to travel to work, was increase

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% compared to the year 1958. Went out with family or friends and other exercises shared the same data with 6% each