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The movement of people from villages to cities for work can cause serious problems in both places. What are the serious problems associated with this? What measures can be taken to solve these problems?

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Lately
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 we all know that
,
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there is not much place to work in the
village
. that's why most of the people living in the
village
 want to
move
 to the
city
, they need the get help to solve
this
 problem and
this
 essay will suggest solutions that are helpful to overcome
this
 issue.
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problem
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problems
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 is jobs in
village
life
. Of course, living in a
village
 is more difficult than living in a
city
, so people there want to
move
 to the
city
 to make their lives easier.On
the
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top of that, It is difficult for a family living in a
village
 to take care of their children and give them
education
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an education
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due to
 there are not many schools there. If families want to give a
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successful
 education to their children, they should
move
 to the
city
 or the government should help them.
Furthermore
, If they want to
move
 to the
city
, it will not be easy again because it is not so easy to comply with
the
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city
life
 and if you work in a job
and if
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that does not pay much, your
life
 may become more difficult and ambitious.
To sum up
, In the
village
 and
city
life
 has its own difficulties and if we want a
succesfull
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successful
life
 we have to deal with these difficulties.
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