The graph below gives information about the percentage of the populationin four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The line graph illustrates the trend of the proportion of the total
population
who are living in the Philippines
, Malaysia
, Thailand
and Indonesia
over the past 50 years
as well as
the predictions for the future 20 years
.
Overall
, it is clear that
the population
in Malaysia
, Thailand
and Indonesia
, except the Philippines
, is in fluctuating trend. It is also
noticeable that the Philippines
is the highest population
in 1970, while
Malaysia
will become the highest at the end
of the predicted period.
In 1970, around 30% of the total population
come from Malaysia
, whereas
the Philipines is slightly higher than it, at roughly 31%. After 20 years
, Malaysia
's population
rises rocketed by around 15 percentage points, to around 45%. Compare to the Philippines
, it is essentially unchanged in the first 10 years
but dramatically rises to 47% in the following 10 years
, which surpasses Malaysia
.
In contrast
, both the population
of Thailand
and Indonesia
are lower than 20% of the total in 1970, and Indonesia
is fewer amounts of people, at around 13%. The figure for Indonesia
has a significant increase through the period, and passes the proportion of Thailand
and the Philippines
in 2000 and 2010, respectively. Moreover
, 20 years
later, Malaysia
will rise to account for the highest proportion to 80% of the total, followed by Malaysia
and Indonesia
, at around 60% and 52% respectively as well as
Thailand
will be the last
one, which is only half of the total population
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