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The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table compared the
sales
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 of coffee and bananas with fair trade-labelled in England,
Switzerland
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,
Denmark
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, Belgium and
Sweden
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 in the years 1999 and 2004.
Overall
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, the United Kingdom (UK) was the highest
sales
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 of Coffee,
while
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Sweden
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 was the lowest one in 2004. Compared to the category of Bananas,
Switzerland
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 accounted for the highest
sales
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whereas
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Denmark
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 was the lowerest one in the same year. In the first table, the highest
increased
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 in coffee
sales
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 was in the UK, which increased by more than time
times
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 to 20
million
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euros
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. Moving to
Switzerland
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, it rose significantly two
times
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, which was from 3 to 6
million
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. Belgium
also
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 rose nearly 2
times
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, similar to
Switzerland
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, ranging from 1
million
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 to 1.7
million
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.
Denmark
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 and
Sweden
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, the other countries, had the same increased scale which was only 0.2
million
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as well as
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 the total number counts below 2
million
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 in 2004. In the second table,
Switzerland
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 accounted for the highest amount in selling fairtrade bananas, at 47
million
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of
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euros
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 in 2004,
while
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 the UK had the highest increase, which was more than 5
times
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, from 1
million
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euros
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 in 1999 to 5.5
million
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euros
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 in 2004. Meanwhile, Belgium had a similar increasing scale during the same period,increased for 2
times
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 or more ranging from 0.6 to 4
million
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euros
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.
Sweden
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 and
Denmark
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 are the ones who fell
sales
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 by 0.8 and 1.1
million
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euros
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 ,respectively.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, switzerland, denmark, sweden, times, million, euros with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fairtrade-labelled
  • sales figures
  • percentage increase/decrease
  • European countries
  • sales volume
  • notable trend
  • exponential growth
  • moderate rise
  • marked decline
  • comparative analysis
  • economic factors
  • consumer preferences
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