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In the past, knowlege was contained in books. Nowadays, knowlege is uploded to the internet. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

#knowlege #books #internet
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 decades ago, almost all the information was available in
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books. But up to
know
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, Because of Technology
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, all the new data has been
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 to the
internet
. In my opinion, the advantages
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 the drawbacks. Nowadays, many
people
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 data
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Firstly
, new and fresh
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 and information.
For example
, if someone wants to read recent news he or she always
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 to visit
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,
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 or other telegram channels why? Because if someone happens special, after 15 minutes it spreads throws the
internet
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books, until publishers publish
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people
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 aware of
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humans have been comparing the cost between
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internet
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. A recent search shows that almost 80% of
people
 are using
internet
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 in the USA, but only 20% of
people
 are preferring to acquire knowledge
book
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. The main factor for
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 book which cost $10 on one side and if there free choice definitely take
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 option because of free.
To sum up
, even though in the past all of the
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in books, days, nowadays, everything is available
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 and
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 option has a lot of advantages for
people
 nowadays.
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