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Once upon a time. There was a
girl
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named Little Red Riding Hood. One day Little Red Riding Hood wanted to meet her
grandma
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. Before she left, her mom wanted her to give
Grandma
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food.
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she walked through the forest. She saw flowers. She picked one to give it to her
grandma
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.
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she heard something from the back. She turned around and saw the
wolf
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. The
wolf
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said what was in the basket? The
girl
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said it was my
grandma
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's food. The
wolf
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said you must give me. She rejects it because it's for
Grandma
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. After finishing a conversation, she walked to
Grandma
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's
house
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. When she already went to
Grandma
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's
house
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. She didn't notice that the
wolf
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ran to her
Grandma
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's
house
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. And already ate her
grandma
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and became a
grandma
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. When she opened the door. She was shocked because many things changed for her
grandma
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but she didn’t think anything. The
wolf
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said come closer. After the
girl
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came closer. The
wolf
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leaped
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on her and ate her.
Afterward
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, the lumberjack near the
house
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heard something. He opened the door and saw the
wolf
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.
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he chased the
wolf
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until he could help the
girl
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and
grandma
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.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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