These days many countries help other countries by giving free food, medical, or other aid. What are the benefits and drawbacks of this for countries that give and receive.

Once upon a time. There was a
girl
named Little Red Riding Hood. One day Little Red Riding Hood wanted to meet her
grandma
. Before she left, her mom wanted her to give
Grandma
food.
Then
she walked through the forest. She saw flowers. She picked one to give it to her
grandma
.
Then
she heard something from the back. She turned around and saw the
wolf
. The
wolf
said what was in the basket? The
girl
said it was my
grandma
's food. The
wolf
said you must give me. She rejects it because it's for
Grandma
. After finishing a conversation, she walked to
Grandma
's
house
. When she already went to
Grandma
's
house
. She didn't notice that the
wolf
ran to her
Grandma
's
house
. And already ate her
grandma
and became a
grandma
. When she opened the door. She was shocked because many things changed for her
grandma
but she didn’t think anything. The
wolf
said come closer. After the
girl
came closer. The
wolf
leaped
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on her and ate her.
Afterward
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, the lumberjack near the
house
heard something. He opened the door and saw the
wolf
.
Then
he chased the
wolf
until he could help the
girl
and
grandma
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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