The given bar graph shows the estimated continent-wise increase in food production (in million MT) needed to feed the world population in 2045. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The presented block graph clearly depicts
approximate
rise in the production of Add an article
the approximate
food
required to cater the
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for the
food
requirement of world's
population for the year 2045. Correct article usage
the world's
Additionally
, the data is calibrated in numbers.
At a fleeting glance, it is evident that Africa needs to produce the highest in order to sustain its population, whereas
Europe is has
to produce the least among the five continents.
To take a deep look, 400 million MT, which is the highest among all the continents under study, is needed to be produced by Africa to meet the dietary needs of its population in the year 2045. Change the verb form
has
Also
, it needs to produce 4 times more than the
South America, which has the Correct article usage
apply
second highest
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second-highest
food
requirement of 100 million MT.
To add more details, among the remaining three continents Asia has to necessitate its crop production in order to meet the demand of about 90 million MT, while
North America needs to cultivate nearly half of this
quantity. Moreover
, Europe is self-sufficient with almost neglible
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negligible
requirement
for Fix the agreement mistake
requirements
food
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