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In the past , students completed their higher education in their own country but , nowadays they like to go abroad to complete their higher education . Write advantages and disadvantages .

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An increasing number of people think that studying in another
country
 is better than
education
 in their
country
.
However
, there are others who think exactly the opposite. In
this
 essay, I will write about the advantages and disadvantages of
Education
 abroad.
Although
 there are several benefits,I will mention two of them only.
To begin
 with, studying overseas made
to
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them become more independent, as they will try a lot of things in a new
country
 ,in ,addition they will face a lot of problems that they have to solve
otherwise
 they will not succeed in all
them
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 lives,for ,instance my brother Ahmed travelled to Cape town in South Africa
,
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because he needs to improve his language,but he improves not only his language but
also
 his health and his morals, even his body is improved. Another important advantage is gain
experiences
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of
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 different cultures of the world,
such
 as Ahmed having lived with a South African family and
he
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cooked for himself,
,
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furthermore
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 he was learning with the same family and has more experience
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 cooking. It goes without saying that every coin has two faces.Indeed,
Education
 abroad comes with a bunch of drawbacks.
Firstly
, most students feel sad and lonely, I mean when they come to a new
country
 and they know nobody at all they will be feeling lonely.
last
 but not least, learning bad habits, on the one hand, they will see a few bad habits and some of their friends do it and some of them will do the same what their friends do,
for
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 one of my friends is called Ali he went to another
country
 and some bad people gave to him an alcoholic drink and he has not left
this
 habit yet. To summarize everything that has been stated, studying overseas has many advantages
such
 as becoming more Independent and learning a new experience. There are
also
 disadvantages
for instance
 Learning bad habits and Feeling lonely. In my opinion, I think that
Education
 abroad is a double-edged weapon.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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