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In the past, most people worked for small businesses, while more people now work for large businesses. What are the advantages and disadvantages of working for large businesses?

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Nowadays, many people want
work
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 for large
business
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businesses
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.In large
business
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businesses
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, the jobs are stable and ensure a good life for
their
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them
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.
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,
work
 and
workplace
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the workplace
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 are stressful. The advantages related
the
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to the
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stable
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stability
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 in the
work
.Large
business
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businesses
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 belong to
employees
.If they didn’t have them the
business
 would affect heavily.Because of reasons,
staffs
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staff
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 don’t worry about their jobs. With the amount of big
employees
,we will need many managers to control good
works
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work
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.When companies are made by good
employees
work
 productivity will increase,
lead
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leading
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 to the boss will promote them.For
examples
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example
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,in VN Vinfast is a big company and there are staff do at here.
However
, if they didn’t do well,
you
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they
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 could lose their
work
.
On the other hand
, the disadvantages when
make
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making
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 for
such
company
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a company
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.
First,
all of
employees
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the employees
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 make for
big
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a big
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 company with
the
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a
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 schedule dense.Because of
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the reason
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reason
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,reason
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 they don’t have time for
holiday
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a holiday
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 or next to the family. With the
increase
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increased
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 demands of consumers,managers want
employees
 to
work
 overtime to keep up demands of customers.But
this
 thing
it
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apply
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affect
to
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apply
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their health mental and
long term
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long-term
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 effects. For
examples
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example
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, the worker
make
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makes
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 8 hours a day.
However
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,However
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 the large
companities
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companies
 want the staff made more
8
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than 8
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hours a day.Despite
such
difficulties
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,difficulties
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 if they got over they would
more
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have more
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 money In the conclusion, there are many difficulties. When they get over the
successful
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 will come to them
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