The charts below show the distribution of world's water and the use of water in three countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the distribution of world's water and the use of water in three countries.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie graphs illustrate the
overall
water
percentage and freshwater rate worldwide ,
whereas
the bar chart compares the percentage of
water
used for households, farming and industrial purpose in different nations.
Overall
, most of the
water
on the earth is salt
water
,
while
a large centenary of freshwater is in frozen form. Egypt and
Saudi
Arabia use comparatively large quantities of
water
for agricultural purposes,
whereas
Canada
uses a great rate of
water
for industrial purposes. 97% of the earth's is salt
water
,
whereas
the remaining only 3% is drinkable freshwater. Out of all the freshwater available globally, almost 80% is frozen and 20% is underground. Surprisingly, only 1% of freshwater worldwide is available on the surface. As far as
water
usage in different countries is concerned, it can be said that Egypt and
Saudi
Arabia show similar patterns
in contrast
to
Canada
. Overwhelming 70-80% of
water
is consumed by the Egyptian and
Saudi
Arabian agricultural sectors
in contrast
to only 10% in
Canada
. The difference between the percentage of
water
used for domestic and industrial purposes in
Saudi
Arabia and Egypt is minor (2-3%).
However
,
Canada
uses the highest fee (around 80%) of
water
for industrial use, whilst the lowest (essentially 10%) for agricultural use.
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