The charts below show the distribution of world's water and the use of water in three countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The pie graphs illustrate the

overall

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water

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percentage and freshwater rate worldwide ,

whereas

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the bar chart compares the percentage of

water

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used for households, farming and industrial purpose in different nations.

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, most of the

water

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on the earth is salt

water

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a large centenary of freshwater is in frozen form. Egypt and

Saudi

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Arabia use comparatively large quantities of

water

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for agricultural purposes,

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Canada

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uses a great rate of

water

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for industrial purposes. 97% of the earth's is salt

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the remaining only 3% is drinkable freshwater. Out of all the freshwater available globally, almost 80% is frozen and 20% is underground. Surprisingly, only 1% of freshwater worldwide is available on the surface. As far as

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usage in different countries is concerned, it can be said that Egypt and

Saudi

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Arabia show similar patterns

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Canada

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. Overwhelming 70-80% of

water

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is consumed by the Egyptian and

Saudi

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Arabian agricultural sectors

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to only 10% in

Canada

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. The difference between the percentage of

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used for domestic and industrial purposes in

Saudi

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Arabia and Egypt is minor (2-3%).

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Canada

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uses the highest fee (around 80%) of

water

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for industrial use, whilst the lowest (essentially 10%) for agricultural use.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, saudi, canada with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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5 paragraphs

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The charts below show the distribution of world's water and the use of water in three countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Some people think the government should invest more money in teaching science than other subjects in order for a country to develop and progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people say that the only reason for learning language is in order to travel ro or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people think that an international car-free day is an effective way to reduce air pollution. Others think there are more effective ways to do this. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

It is inevitable that traditional cultures will be lost as technology develops. Technology and traditional cultures are incompatible.

Please elaborate on your current physical and mental health, including any dental or oral treatment, medical interventions, and mental health therapy or counseling.