You have eaten at a restaurant and it was such a terrible experience that you have decided to inform the manager by letter of what happened, and that you want your money back. Things to include: – You need to be concise but explain what happened. – No one responds to insults. – What do you want to happen? – You want to be taken seriously.

Dear Sir or Madam, I hope
this
letter finds you well. I am writing
this
letter to express my dissatisfaction regarding your service. Unfortunately, I experienced terrible Allow me to elaborate
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details.
Firstly
, my family and I engaged to have
a
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dinner at your restaurant to celebrate my mother's birthday on June 22nd, we chose your restaurant because it is renowned for its seafood.
However
, the oysters that we ordered
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awful.
In addition
, your signature salmon dish was not fresh.
Therefore
, we did not touch the food at all. I have
complaint
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to your customer service about
this
matter,but there
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no response from them.
Moreover
, they solely give us a voucher as compensation. I would like you to investigate
this
problem and kindly request a refund for the amount I paid for my dinner.
Furthermore
, If we are unable to find
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, I may be compelled to report the situation to the media. I kindly request your prompt attention to
this
matter. I hope we can resolve
this
issue promptly and ensure customer satisfaction. Yours sincerely, Jun
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