The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030

The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030
The line graph depicts the average figure of UK
passengers
travelling every day by common transportation over the course of 60 years starting from 1970. By and large, the total of people travelling by
car
and
train
increases gradually
while
the amount of
bus
travellers decreases steadily. In the year 1970, the
car
was the most favoured transportation with 5
million
commuters every day. followed by
bus
and
train
with 4
million
and 2
million
passenger daily. Over time(1980-2000), the
car
was still the most trendy and has risen to 7
million
commuters daily.
Moreover
, the quantity of
train
passengers
has reached the
number
3
million
.
In contrast
, the
number
of
bus
users fell steadily from
resulted
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only 3.5
million
passengers
every day. To prediction(2030), the
number
of
car
users is expected to reach a peak with 9
million
users and
train
passengers
are predicted to rise to nearly 5
million
.
However
, there will be no rise in the
number
of
a
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bus
passengers
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words passengers, car, train, bus, million, number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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