The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030

The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030
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The line graph depicts the average figure of UK
passengers
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travelling every day by common transportation over the course of 60 years starting from 1970. By and large, the total of people travelling by
car
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and
train
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increases gradually
while
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the amount of
bus
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travellers decreases steadily. In the year 1970, the
car
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was the most favoured transportation with 5
million
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commuters every day. followed by
bus
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and
train
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with 4
million
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and 2
million
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passenger daily. Over time(1980-2000), the
car
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was still the most trendy and has risen to 7
million
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commuters daily.
Moreover
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, the quantity of
train
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passengers
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has reached the
number
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3
million
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.
In contrast
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, the
number
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of
bus
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users fell steadily from
resulted
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inresulted
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only 3.5
million
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passengers
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every day. To prediction(2030), the
number
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of
car
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users is expected to reach a peak with 9
million
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users and
train
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passengers
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are predicted to rise to nearly 5
million
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.
However
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, there will be no rise in the
number
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of
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bus
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passengers
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words passengers, car, train, bus, million, number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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