The charts below give information on the agesof the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information on the agesof the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below give information on the agesof the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given pie charts compare the range of ages of the
people
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in
Yemen
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and Italy in 2000 and their expectations for 2050.
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, it can be clearly seen that it will be projected that
people
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age 15-59
years
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will be dominated in both countries. There is a little percentage of elderly in
Yemen
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almost 50% of the elderly will be occupied in Italy. In 2000, 46.3% of Yemeni were in age 15-59
years
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while
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figure was higher in Italy at 61.6%. More than 50% of
people
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aged 0-14 dominated
Yemen
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and only 14.3% of
people
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of the same age lived in Italy. There were merely 3.6% elderly (60+
years
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) who inhabited
Yemen
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. By 2050, It will be expected that 57.3% population aged 15-59
years
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will be dominated by
Yemen
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and
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percentage will occupy Italy at 46.2%. Only 5.7% elderly are going to live in
Yemen
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,
this
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proportion is higher in Italy at 42.3%.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words people, yemen, years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • age distribution
  • demographics
  • populations
  • projections
  • trends
  • percentages
  • age groups
  • youthful
  • aging population
  • median age
  • shifts
  • dramatic changes
  • elderly
  • working-age population
  • dependency ratio
  • fertility rate
  • life expectancy
  • baby boomers
  • demographic transition
  • geriatric
  • adolescents
  • juveniles
  • seniors
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