Your local public library wants to make improvements to their services and facilities. In order to get ideas from the public, they have asked library users to send them suggestions in writing. Write a letter to the librarian. In your letter -describe what you like about the library - say what you don’t like - make suggestions for improvements

Dear

library

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manager, I wrote

this

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letter to give a piece of my mind to improve the

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library

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library's

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condition. Honestly, I encountered some

problem

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when I visited the second floor of the

library

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. Here is some advice that I could

gave

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. In the beginning, I think you should take more attention to the

second floor

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stairs and tables. Some of them had already broken and

need

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needed

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to

be replace

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.

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,

There

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are plenty of books

in

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on

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the table I suggest that more staff are needed

in

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the second floor.

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, I think you should

to

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apply

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replace or wash your air conditioner because It is unfunctional during the

day time

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daytime

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. The stuff I would like you to keep is the staff that

really

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is really

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helpful and kind

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your clock in the middle It

really

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authentic. I would kindly

waiting

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for the improvement that will be made to the

library

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. Thanks for the opportunity that have been given.

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Your

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Faithfully, Hung