Your local public library wants to make improvements to their services and facilities. In order to get ideas from the public, they have asked library users to send them suggestions in writing. Write a letter to the librarian. In your letter -describe what you like about the library - say what you don’t like - make suggestions for improvements
Dear
library
manager,
I wrote this
letter to give a piece of my mind to improve the library
condition. Honestly, I encountered some Change noun form
library's
problem
when I visited the second floor of the Fix the agreement mistake
problems
library
. Here is some advice that I could gave
.
In the beginning, I think you should take more attention to the Change the verb form
give
second floor
stairs and tables. Some of them had already broken and Add a hyphen
second-floor
need
to Wrong verb form
needed
be replace
. Change the verb form
be replaced
Then
, There
are plenty of books Fix capitalization
there
in
the table I suggest that more staff are needed Change preposition
on
in
the second floor. Change preposition
on
Lastly
, I think you should to
replace or wash your air conditioner because It is unfunctional during the Change the verb form
apply
day time
.
The stuff I would like you to keep is the staff that Correct your spelling
daytime
really
helpful and kind Add a missing verb
is really
also
your clock in the middle It really
authentic. I would kindly Add a missing verb
is really
waiting
for the improvement that will be made to the Change the verb form
wait
be waiting
library
. Thanks for the opportunity that have been given.
Replace the word
You're
You are
Your
Faithfully,
HungCorrect the word
Yours
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