Your local public library wants to make improvements to their services and facilities. In order to get ideas from the public, they have asked library users to send them suggestions in writing. Write a letter to the librarian. In your letter -describe what you like about the library - say what you don’t like - make suggestions for improvements

Dear
library
manager, I wrote
this
letter to give a piece of my mind to improve the
library
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condition. Honestly, I encountered some
problem
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when I visited the second floor of the
library
. Here is some advice that I could
gave
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. In the beginning, I think you should take more attention to the
second floor
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stairs and tables. Some of them had already broken and
need
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to
be replace
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.
Then
,
There
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are plenty of books
in
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the table I suggest that more staff are needed
in
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the second floor.
Lastly
, I think you should
to
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replace or wash your air conditioner because It is unfunctional during the
day time
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. The stuff I would like you to keep is the staff that
really
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helpful and kind
also
your clock in the middle It
really
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authentic. I would kindly
waiting
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for the improvement that will be made to the
library
. Thanks for the opportunity that have been given.
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Your
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Faithfully, Hung
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • extensive collection
  • resourceful
  • helpful staff
  • friendly assistance
  • tranquil atmosphere
  • comfortable environment
  • limited operating hours
  • restricted access
  • insufficient study spaces
  • quiet spot
  • extend the hours
  • accommodate
  • private study rooms
  • cater
  • digital resources
  • e-books
  • audiobooks
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