In today’s world advanced science and technology, we will greatly value our artists such as musicians, painters and writers. What can arts tell us about life that science and technology cannot?

In the contemporary world characterized by advanced
science
and
technology
, we place
high
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significance on artists
such
as musicians, painters, and writers since their contribution to various aspects of
life
that the arts can reveal to us, which is beyond the scope of
science
and
technology
. In
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. Granted, the advent of
science
and
technology
have
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made almost everything on earth feasible for human beings
such
as great infrastructures, modern medicine, digital communication and advanced
educational
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, these opportunities are bringing up people's standard of living
while
boosting their economic levels up to the ladder.
However
, these technologies or scientific findings cannot touch the
human's
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soul since individuals in the modern era are suffering from
high stress
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levels, depression and suicidal thoughts, sometimes they cannot face the reality of
life
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challenges
hence
most of them are breaking off easily.
In contrast
,
Art
is traditionally acknowledged to have the ability to capture the complexity and richness of the human experience in a way that
science
and
technology
cannot. Specifically, through
art
, we can explore themes
such
as love, loss, and identity, there
subsequently
gaining a deeper understanding of what it means to be human. Another contribution of
art
in multiple lives’ perspectives is that inherently subjective, meaning that it is open to interpretation and can be experienced in different ways by numerous people.
This
subjectivity allows
art
to capture the diversity of
mankind
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experiences and offer multiple perspectives on a given theme or idea, thereby leading
for
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each person to realize their inner self and reducing the pressure of
life
. In short,
while
science
and
technology
have greatly advanced our understanding of the world,
art
still has much to offer in terms of exploring the complexities of
life
and offering insights into the human experience.
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