In today’s world advanced science and technology, we will greatly value our artists such as musicians, painters and writers. What can arts tell us about life that science and technology cannot?

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In the contemporary world characterized by advanced
science
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and
technology
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, we place
high
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significance on artists
such
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as musicians, painters, and writers since their contribution to various aspects of
life
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that the arts can reveal to us, which is beyond the scope of
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and
technology
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. In
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essay, I will analyze two elucidations before drawing
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. Granted, the advent of
science
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and
technology
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have
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made almost everything on earth feasible for human beings
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as great infrastructures, modern medicine, digital communication and advanced
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, these opportunities are bringing up people's standard of living
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boosting their economic levels up to the ladder.
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, these technologies or scientific findings cannot touch the
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soul since individuals in the modern era are suffering from
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levels, depression and suicidal thoughts, sometimes they cannot face the reality of
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life
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challenges
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most of them are breaking off easily.
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,
Art
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is traditionally acknowledged to have the ability to capture the complexity and richness of the human experience in a way that
science
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and
technology
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cannot. Specifically, through
art
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, we can explore themes
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as love, loss, and identity, there
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gaining a deeper understanding of what it means to be human. Another contribution of
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in multiple lives’ perspectives is that inherently subjective, meaning that it is open to interpretation and can be experienced in different ways by numerous people.
This
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subjectivity allows
art
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to capture the diversity of
mankind
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experiences and offer multiple perspectives on a given theme or idea, thereby leading
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each person to realize their inner self and reducing the pressure of
life
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. In short,
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science
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and
technology
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have greatly advanced our understanding of the world,
art
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still has much to offer in terms of exploring the complexities of
life
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and offering insights into the human experience.
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