As air travel has become cheaper, more and more people are travelling abroad for their vacations instead of visiting places in their own country. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this?
The implications of cheaper airline tickets make many
people
nowadays prefer to holiday overseas than Use synonyms
travel
in their own home country. There are benefits and cons regarding these problems, so Use synonyms
this
essay will elaborate in detail below.
On the one hand, many airlines in the parts of the world attempt to make interesting advertisements by promoting cheap tickets to some Linking Words
destinations
abroad, so many Use synonyms
people
will use their airline to Use synonyms
travel
to the Use synonyms
destinations
that they desire , Use synonyms
while
the practice is bad for domestic income especially for many small businesses which related to transportations service cannot get their revenue. To illustrate, Bus companies that sell their ticket to domestic Linking Words
destinations
for approximately 350 dollars cannot compete with the airlines which sell their services abroad for only 200 dollars. Use synonyms
As a result
, many individuals prefer to Linking Words
travel
by air Use synonyms
travel
because planes are more affordable than land transportation.
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On the other hand
, attractive Linking Words
destinations
in local areas are commonly too monotone and expensive for some Use synonyms
people
and the Use synonyms
entertainment
presented by the provider is too boring since near distance makes Use synonyms
people
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to
often see the same things frequently. To exemplify, the capital city of Indonesia is Jakarta. Jakarta has one of the famous Change preposition
apply
places
called Ancol, and Ancol was established in 1992 since the first time Ancol opened to the public many Use synonyms
people
came to Use synonyms
this
place, Linking Words
while
the Linking Words
entertainment
since their inauguration has not changed, and the entrance ticket is increased to expensive price, in Use synonyms
this
period. Linking Words
Therefore
, travellers prefer to go to different Linking Words
places
by air Use synonyms
travel
, and Use synonyms
in
some Change preposition
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places
of Use synonyms
destinations
provide better sightseeing of nature than domestic Use synonyms
places
in their home country.
In conclusion, cheap Use synonyms
aeroplanes
tickets encourage Change the noun form
aeroplane
people
to trip to different areas since other areas promise better Use synonyms
entertainment
than domestic Use synonyms
entertainment
. Use synonyms
Therefore
, there are more advantages to going by aeroplane than disadvantages.Linking Words
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