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The graph shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005.

The graph shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005.
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The given graph demonstrates the information on the money consumed on
books
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 in four countries which are Germany,France, Italy and
Austria
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 in a period of 10 years. As a whole , among the four citizens spending on
books
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. The number of individuals in France and
Austria
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 showed a
continuous
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 rising trend,
whereas
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 Germans and Italians increased fluctuating. Moving to the detail, the amount of France people in book consumption rose consistently from 55
million
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 US
dollars
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 in 1995
,
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 to 60
million
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dollars
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 in 1999. At the same time, a slight increase can be seen in the payment of
books
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 in
Austria
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, from 30
million
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dollars
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 to 40 US
dollars
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.
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, there was a significant growth in
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Austria
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 from 40
million
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dollars
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 to approximately 63 in the period from 2001 to 2005. When it comes to Germany, in the initial year, it increased and stood at 90
million
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dollars
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.
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a slight dip can be seen in the year
of
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1999 until 2003 which was followed by 85.
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, the amount of money spent
on
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in Italy illustrated an apparent downward trend from 1997 to 1999. In general , those countries which consumed
on
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books
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 were higher than
the
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 initial year.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words books, austria, million, dollars with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • expenditure
  • fluctuate
  • trend
  • peak
  • trough
  • correlation
  • digital reading platforms
  • socio-economic factors
  • initiatives
  • cultural influence
  • statistical data
  • purchasing habits
  • book industry
  • consumer spending
  • educational resources
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