The bar chart shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of Australian males and
females
, who participated in regular physical activities in 6 Use synonyms
age
groups; in 2010.
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Overall
, it is pretty evident that women tended to exercise more than Linking Words
men
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age
groups; except those aged 15 to 24. Use synonyms
Moreover
, it can be seen that the amount of physical activity between both genders fluctuated
at different ages.
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females
,47.7% of women aged between 15 to 24 tended to exercise on a regular basis, Use synonyms
while
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ratio
increased marginally among individuals aged 25-34, which indicates 48.9%. Use synonyms
Moreover
, it stands out from the chart that more than half of women between 35 to 44 performed physical activities with 52.5% respectively. It is Linking Words
also
can be seen that Linking Words
females
in the third and fourth Use synonyms
age
groups (45 to 54 and 55 to 64) share the
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same
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the same
ratio
of 53%. Use synonyms
Additionally
, about 47.1%of seniors, aged 65 and over, worked out regularly.
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men
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men
15to24 years old were the lead with 52.8% in comparison to Use synonyms
females
at the same Use synonyms
age
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Furthermore
, 42.2% of young Linking Words
men
from 25 to 34 were inclined to work out regularly, Use synonyms
likewise
those
aged 45 to 54 and 55 to 64 with almost similar Linking Words
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ratio
of 43.1 and 45.1% respectively. The share of males performing physical movementsFix the agreement mistake
ratios
,
reached the percentage of 46.7 among males aged 65 or over. Remove the comma
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On the contrary
, the third Linking Words
age
group marked the lowest Use synonyms
ratio
with 39.5% respectively.Use synonyms
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