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Describe the type of clothes that you usually like to wear.

When I grew up, I didn't really have a lot of clothes, but I do remember one type that I was particularly fond of. It was jeans that are
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 stylish. I recall that I got them from a variety of places, including department stores, online retailers, and local brands. Sometimes, I
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 got them as gifts from one of my best friends. So as I said, I have a pretty simple lifestyle,
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 I tend to buy new jeans depending on their use value. It means I only replace them when they are out of use. And when I choose what types of jeans I want to buy, I consider a few different factors. They weren't state-of-the-art at all, just very simple, blackish or bluish colour.
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, they have to fit well my body type because I am so fat, you know. I probably only wore them for a few first months since I bought them, anywhere I was in the company or coffee shops with my colleagues and friends. It wasn't unique, but I think it had sentimental value for me. It allows me to feel comfortable and confident
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 still looking fashionable. It was one of the best I have ever worn.

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