You recently stayed at a hotel and you had a great time. Write a letter to the hotel. In your letter thank the manager and his staff give some particular examples of why you enjoyed your stay at the hotel so much explain that you have written a review of the hotel on a popular website for tourists

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Dear Manager, I am writing to appreciate your and your colleague's service
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I stayed in your
hotel
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. My name is Tina and booked a king
room
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for our 15 years wedding anniversary
last
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month in your
hotel
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. Thanks for your kind and amazing projects, which were memorable and unforgettable forever.
Firstly
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, I have to mention that when we were check-in, your staff help us to freely upgrade the
room
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from a King
room
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to an Ocean view
room
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The landscape with ocean sunset was amazing.
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, we lost the diabetes pills of my husband, your staff help us to contact the local doctor who can get a prescription immediately.
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, I could not imagine what would happen later.
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, both the breakfast and the swimming pool are so great with advanced equipment I have never seen, the refreshment you provided in the breakfast is delicious as well.
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is an enjoyable journey. I have already highly recommended your
hotel
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on Facebook and I am already looking forward to visiting your
hotel
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again next holiday. Yours sincerely, Tina.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • expressing gratitude
  • exceptional service
  • hospitality
  • cleanliness
  • quality of food
  • attentiveness
  • memorable experiences
  • organized tours
  • unique facilities
  • positive review
  • tourist website
  • motivated
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