The pie chart below show the most common advantages and disadvantages of Fairmont island, according to a survey of visitors

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The pie chart provides information about the most basic benefits and drawbacks of Fairmont

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island

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Island

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according to

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a survey of

visitors

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Overall

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, the most common problematic thing was food quality

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the

island

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meanwhile

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visitors

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found local people most liked and advantageous. Food quality is depicted under half of the pie chart as a main disadvantage and another third of the pie chart belongs to

the

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apply

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entertainment. 20 per cent of people

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claimed to dislike about

high

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the high

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cost of living,

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however

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11% of

visitors

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were satisfied with a good

accomadation

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accommodation

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Also

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40% of travellers liked the

island

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citizens

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37 per cent of

visitors

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enjoyed

with

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the scenery.

Island

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culture

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attracted 12 per cent of

visitors

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Vocabulary: Replace the words island, visitors with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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5
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
11
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

120 words

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The pie chart below show the most common advantages and disadvantages of Fairmont island, according to a survey of visitors

You are unhappy about a plan to make your local airport bigger and increase the number of flights. You live near the airport. Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter, explain where you live describe the problem give reasons why you do not want this development

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