The pie charts below shows units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000
The pie charts give
the
information about the total production of Correct article usage
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units
of electricity
in Australia
and France
by the different fuel sources (coal, oil
, natural gas, hydro
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hydropower
power
and nuclear power
) in the year 1980 and 2000.
Overall
, the total production of electricity
in Australia
was higher in both the year (100units and 170units respectively) than the French which was 90 units
in 1980 and 180 units
in 2000. Coal is the main source in Australian cities. However
, France
used nuclear power
. Although
Australia
did not use the
nuclear Correct article usage
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power
.
In 1980, Australia
generate 50 units
by
coal, and 10 Change preposition
of
units
from
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of
oil
. Although
nuclear gas and hydro
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hydropower
power
produce the same amount
of units
which was 20. In France
the least amount
is by water which was 5 units
and 15 units
were produced through nuclear power
. Although
natural gas and coal made 25 units
of total.
In 2000, 170 units
of electricity
were produced in Australia
while
in
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France
produced 180 units
. Coal generated the
130 Correct article usage
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units
in total in Australia
which was the highest amount
and the least was produced through oil
which was 2 Add an article
the oil
units
. However
, electricity
generated by water was 36 units
. Nuclear power
was the main fuel source used in France
to generate electricity
126. Coal and oil
made the same amount
of electricity
25 approximately. However
, the least amount
was produced by water.Submitted by seharfazal9 on
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