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The pie charts below shows units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000

The pie charts below shows units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000
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The pie charts give
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information about the total production of
units
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 of
electricity
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 in
Australia
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 and
France
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 by the different fuel sources (coal,
oil
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, natural gas,
hydro
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hydropower
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power
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 and nuclear
power
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) in the year 1980 and 2000.
Overall
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, the total production of
electricity
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 in
Australia
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 was higher in both the year (100units and 170units respectively) than the French which was 90
units
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 in 1980 and 180
units
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 in 2000. Coal is the main source in Australian cities.
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,
France
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 used nuclear
power
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.
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Australia
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 did not use
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nuclear
power
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. In 1980,
Australia
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 generate 50
units
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by
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 coal, and 10
units
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from
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of
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oil
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.
Although
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 nuclear gas and
hydro
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hydropower
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power
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 produce the same
amount
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 of
units
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 which was 20. In
France
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 the least
amount
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 is by water which was 5
units
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 and 15
units
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 were produced through nuclear
power
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.
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 natural gas and coal made 25
units
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 of total. In 2000, 170
units
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 of
electricity
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 were produced in
Australia
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while
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in
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France
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 produced 180
units
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. Coal generated
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130
units
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 in total in
Australia
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 which was the highest
amount
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 and the least was produced through
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oil
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the oil
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 which was 2
units
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.
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,
electricity
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 generated by water was 36
units
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. Nuclear
power
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 was the main fuel source used in
France
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 to generate
electricity
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 126. Coal and
oil
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 made the same
amount
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 of
electricity
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 25 approximately.
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, the least
amount
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 was produced by water.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "although, however".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words units, electricity, australia, france, oil, power, amount with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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